1. Her topic was interesting enough to attract audience's attention. 2. She used a lot of pictures and that really helped audience's understanding. 3. She had prepared presentation a lot. Even though, her presentation includes much information to memorize she didn't used notes. 4. Her voice volume was just perfect and her pronunciation was clear and good. 5. She used proper gestures.
What could be improved
1. Because there were many peoples in the class, she seemed like nervous when other students made noise. 2. It will be better if she made a more eye contact with the audiences.
Strong Points
ReplyDelete1. Her topic was good for informative speech and it was interesting.
2. Her opening was good to link with her topic. She brought up the Children's day. I think it was nice.
3. She prepared visual aids very well. It made the audience to be drawn by the speech.
4. Her speech was well organized.
5. She used no scripts. Even though the speech had a lot of information, she was fluent to deliever it. It was impressive
6. Her posture was good looking professional and she used appropriate hand gestures.
7. She did good job on time managing.
What could be improved
1. During the speech, her eyes were mostly on the camera or the screen. It would have been better to have more eye-contacts with the audience.
2. For some her ppt slides, she put too many words in it. It would been better if she simplified the content on her visual aids.
Strong Points
ReplyDelete1. Her topic was interesting enough to attract audience's attention.
2. She used a lot of pictures and that really helped audience's understanding.
3. She had prepared presentation a lot. Even though, her presentation includes much information to memorize she didn't used notes.
4. Her voice volume was just perfect and her pronunciation was clear and good.
5. She used proper gestures.
What could be improved
1. Because there were many peoples in the class, she seemed like nervous when other students made noise.
2. It will be better if she made a more eye contact with the audiences.